We will know one day why He has given us trials. Hold on tite! The ride isn't over yet.

Again! Sadness! ;.;

But, it's a really good poem. Great expressing the emotion.

*big hug* I'm so sorry for you. ;-; Again, a beuatiful, very sad poem.

Once again, wow. This poem is even more powerful than the first. I'm so, so sorry. You can tell that this came from the heart. Well done.

This is so beautifully tragic. I love thw words you put in italics, I think it makes the poem flow really well. So far I think that this is my favourite by you!

It's def. enough to love and grieve. Don't ever think it isn't. ~ Alexz Lynn

This is a great poem. Your emotions are portrayed well. Remember though, it's not your fault! Continue to live your life to the fullest. That's what she would have wanted. I love you bunches! You can always have my shoulder if you need to cry. ~Sarah Anne

Wow, that is so good! I remember when i was suicidal... ugh, it was so scary (obviously im over it now) but you captured it's essence perfectly! keep writing!