 TrueToMyself 2005-02-16 . chapter 1Aw...you have written this so well; the childlike innocence and pride of "her little tree" is so believable!
Just one thing: for Line 4, I don't feel that the commas are necessary (My little tree is no more than two feet! rather than My little tree, is no more, than two feet!).
Overall, great job. Keep writing! ~*~TTM~*~ |