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Reviews For: My Little Christmas Tree
Serpentyna 2005-03-19 . chapter 1
It seems as if this was written through the eyes of a child. It's so cute!LOLLuvs and Hugs,Serpentyna
Mettie 2005-02-16 . chapter 1
Aw! How cute is this! I remember feeling so proud of the little things like that as a child... If only we could reverse time to reappreciate those small moments. This is well-written; the language used is very appropriate and sets the tone very well. Great job! Keep Writin'! ~*Mettie*~
TrueToMyself 2005-02-16 . chapter 1
Aw...you have written this so well; the childlike innocence and pride of "her little tree" is so believable!

Just one thing: for Line 4, I don't feel that the commas are necessary (My little tree is no more than two feet! rather than My little tree, is no more, than two feet!).

Overall, great job. Keep writing! ~*~TTM~*~
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