a tad confusing in the middle but i like this, it's very sad and i've ont read anything like this, well done x weasel within x

I really like this one ash, it`s intriguing. Keep writing! Bye

-shutters- That was a shutter of happiness over this poem... I like this one... Kinda makes me think of Memory in some way... Was Memory the inspiration? I know you said you were writing something after I wrote it, so I can't help but ask... -shutters- Our minds are scary places! -.-Luv you lots Ash-chan!