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bleakly 5/30/05 . chapter 1You made a very clear visual in my mind with the first four lines. Good job. |
Cloud Burst 4/9/05 . chapter 1great! ur simple words paint a picture in my mind. great poem! |
simpleplan13 2/17/05 . chapter 1wow.. very powerful & beqautifully written |
Crazy Biene 2/17/05 . chapter 1GREAT! It so cool, and well formulated. Love the flow, the word choice, and its really good een though it does not rhyme ! GR8! |
dustytiger 2/16/05 . chapter 1great peice,short and powerful, thank you for sharing |