Reviews for Layers
bleakly 5/30/05 . chapter 1
You made a very clear visual in my mind with the first four lines. Good job.
Cloud Burst 4/9/05 . chapter 1
great! ur simple words paint a picture in my mind. great poem!
simpleplan13 2/17/05 . chapter 1
wow.. very powerful & beqautifully written
Crazy Biene 2/17/05 . chapter 1
GREAT! It so cool, and well formulated. Love the flow, the word choice, and its really good een though it does not rhyme ! GR8!
dustytiger 2/16/05 . chapter 1
great peice,short and powerful, thank you for sharing