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| Manuel Fajar 2005-02-19 ch 1,  | abusefogged clear lens of life, by a sudden passing storm, shelter,—without, you. — though the rain is warm, thought the tropic's sweltering, your absence chills me. — clinging clother cloying, stinging like your memories,— unremovable. — jeans are sogged with rain, broad black stain bleeds out from pen,— blotting out your name. — splashed by passing cars, crossing busy avenue,— broken, lonely heart. — rain washes away, leaves all shining pulchritude,— even hearts once sad. |
| Crazy Biene 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abusewow...amazing, well written, nice emotion,and just everything!! |
| Cyssel 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abuseAhh, beautiful. Love the choice of words. Just excellently written. You definitely have a great load of talent. ^^" -fakeblueink (formerly winterhowl) |
| Aslan Israel 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abuseVery emotional and touching. Great descriptions. I can see the rain... |