fogged clear lens of life,

by a sudden passing storm,

shelter,—without, you.

—

though the rain is warm,

thought the tropic's sweltering,

your absence chills me.

—

clinging clother cloying,

stinging like your memories,—

unremovable.

—

jeans are sogged with rain,

broad black stain bleeds out from pen,—

blotting out your name.

—

splashed by passing cars,

crossing busy avenue,—

broken, lonely heart.

—

rain washes away,

leaves all shining pulchritude,—

even hearts once sad.

wow...amazing, well written, nice emotion,and just everything!!

Ahh, beautiful. Love the choice of words. Just excellently written. You definitely have a great load of talent. ^^" -fakeblueink (formerly winterhowl)

Very emotional and touching. Great descriptions. I can see the rain...