I haven't read your stuff in ages. Nice poem!

Orgasmic images. Honestly, wonderfully vivid and clear imagery.

Awesome imagery=my eternal luff.

This was very brillantly written, and I was bemused at the end of it. Bravo! Bravo Bravismo!

Keep writing.

-Seras Nova

I know I told you what I thought of this already...but I decided to read it..(and delete everything from my account! BAH GAH AND TAH!) I just wanted to say how much I love this poem. It's not a very typical darren style but I can really imagine you adopting this style and making it yours. Love it love it. Aight, thats all I guess! Mwah! ~Beck

I thought it was quite a good poem, with excellent imagery and personifications, until you suddenly said "Pen! Write me a ballad of day!" and so on. It kind of spoiled the overall mood, making not a very good ending.

Wow, that is really good! so parts were a little confusing to me, but it still was very strong!

If it's no trouble, I was hoping you'd R&R my new poem Timeless Rain. Thanks!