 firemounrain 2009-01-03 . chapter 1The common cold is pretty cool as a plotline. |
 Jay Dickson 2005-06-22 . chapter 1Absolutely excellent work. The overall feel, which is added to by the lack of a long exposition, rather than harmed, reminds me of some of the old 1950's short stories I've loved so much for years. |
 Arkash 2005-02-28 . chapter 1This is a powerful, moving story. Though I like happy endings, I've enjoyed it immensely. |
 JaveHarron 2005-02-17 . chapter 1 A short but powerful story. This reminds us why we read serious sci-fi. |
 k-b-cook 2005-02-17 . chapter 1"And you read into what I say too much" I think this just needs to be reworded, perhaps "And you read too much into what I say." That was the only thing that caught my attention.
Beautiful and deep. It is certainly something to think about and as a biologist (in training) I much appreciate it.
Please return R&R if possible. Thanks! |