Hey!

Yeah, it did kinda touch me...I write poems in class...it seems through boredom ideas shine through best.

I like reading your stuff, It's interesting to see the style of someone else. I get sick of looking at my own.

Good job!

Wow... Nice ending. Pretty long too. Ans you wrote this in class? Ha ha, oh well, I guess when forceful inspiration comes to mind, it finds its way to creep through our brain and tap our creativity... Itching our bodies to express it... Nice. Write more, ok? Reach for the stars!

Wow! i love that! I love how it goes from happy-ish to sad in one verse, and keeps doing that. I also love the rain/tears thing.