Haunting! Beautiful imagery...

awesome, again. and hey! i made room for you on my faves list!

The first two lines just draw you in, nice writing.

very well done...i love it...so much meaning and life to this. lots of love ~AllyCred~

interesting... a bit confusing... but It was kinda neat! good job!

Stally

abstract concept you pull it off well. -kismet.

Love the anologies. Can totally relate to the poem. Aye, even the wail "Imperfect, imperfect!" sounds like the sound of a parrot. Nicely done.