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| Painted.Illusion 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuseHaunting! Beautiful imagery... |
| myno 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseawesome, again. and hey! i made room for you on my faves list! |
| catseyeview 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThe first two lines just draw you in, nice writing. |
| AllyCred 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abusevery well done...i love it...so much meaning and life to this. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Kristal 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... a bit confusing... but It was kinda neat! good job! Stally |
| negligible fictional force 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abuseabstract concept you pull it off well. -kismet. |
| tablesalt 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abuseLove the anologies. Can totally relate to the poem. Aye, even the wail "Imperfect, imperfect!" sounds like the sound of a parrot. Nicely done. |