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Fox Angel 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
Hmm I like it reminds me of my dad and his realionship with Sharon (or at least they did go out its all history now)

nice job I love this poem keep wiritng.
Leaving Here 2006-06-05 . chapter 1
Interesting. Impressive.
ThisCut-UpAngel 2005-07-24 . chapter 1
I love this piece! Very well written and the rhyming scheme is a nice touch. Please continue writing.
underminingfaith 2005-05-01 . chapter 1
I love the rhyme scheme - it makes it sound like a song.Also I like how you split up the last lines, to make the impact stronger.
Thyrt 2005-04-03 . chapter 1
awesome..i love the rhyme scheme..don't put down your work, it's great!
Simply Stupid 2005-03-28 . chapter 1
This is fantastic! I love it so much! Well done! I am speechless!
eden is burning 2005-03-26 . chapter 1
Really incredible, bitter and contrasting
Julie Poe 2005-03-25 . chapter 1
I don't know what you're talking about. That poem was AWESOME!
breezy nostrils 2005-02-25 . chapter 1
I feel the same way...after what a year? Yes...heartbreak takes too long to heal. Well done!
Broken Melody 2005-02-18 . chapter 1
Cool, liked it
HailToTheTheives 2005-02-18 . chapter 1
Hate the rhyming sceme? Are you crazy i love it!? I really like the alibi part.

ps. thanks for the review...s :)
Armas Apple 2005-02-18 . chapter 1
Love Hate Love... Yes, that is life for yall!I love the rhyming! I can relate to this!
Ponytail Goddess 2005-02-18 . chapter 1
Very nice. You use really good descriptors. I enjoyed this piece.

-P.G.
simpleplan13 2005-02-17 . chapter 1
i like it.. would you liek to know how to make stanzas?
Aslan Israel 2005-02-17 . chapter 1
Perfect. Nothing wrong with the rhyme scheme.
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