Hmm I like it reminds me of my dad and his realionship with Sharon (or at least they did go out its all history now)

nice job I love this poem keep wiritng.

Interesting. Impressive.

I love this piece! Very well written and the rhyming scheme is a nice touch. Please continue writing.

I love the rhyme scheme - it makes it sound like a song.Also I like how you split up the last lines, to make the impact stronger.

awesome..i love the rhyme scheme..don't put down your work, it's great!

This is fantastic! I love it so much! Well done! I am speechless!

Really incredible, bitter and contrasting

I don't know what you're talking about. That poem was AWESOME!

I feel the same way...after what a year? Yes...heartbreak takes too long to heal. Well done!

Cool, liked it

Hate the rhyming sceme? Are you crazy i love it!? I really like the alibi part.

ps. thanks for the review...s :)

Love Hate Love... Yes, that is life for yall!I love the rhyming! I can relate to this!

Very nice. You use really good descriptors. I enjoyed this piece.

-P.G.

i like it.. would you liek to know how to make stanzas?

Perfect. Nothing wrong with the rhyme scheme.