aw! that's so sweet...whoever you wrote this for(if you wrote this for someone and it's not just random thinking)probably loved it!

This is really sweet and beautiful, keep on writing!

remind me alot of lovesick is love really a sickness? Well, not as you describe it

A very sweet poem, Especially like the ending.

Rocky :)

beautiful work. thanks for the review but awesome job always,mandi 4ever

I wish I had a bf who said sweet things to me.

But this's short, sweet, and to-the-point. Awesome. That's almost exactly how love feels...

Unless you feel guilty cuz ur boyfriend's not ALLOWED to have a gf, so ur dating and hiding it from his parents. That sucks.

But ur writing is awesome. Keep it up. ;)