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Reviews For: Questions At Sunset

myno
2005-02-19
ch 1,
abuseNice poem- i'm fond of sitting on my roof and watching sunrises/sunsets because they never stop amazing me. All the questions in this are things i have wondered as well.
Pill
2005-02-17
ch 1,
abusemollz i absoluetly adore this one!your very talented!i love you and miss you terribly!im coming back soon!
Gaki Toki
2005-02-17
ch 1,
abuseShe sat, her legs dangling off the side of the dock. She lifted her head, the soft rays of the warm sunset shimmering on the small waves of the lake before her. She smiled, knowing she was gifted, she was blessed with this light, this sunset over the lake. She swung her legs, still gazing out over the glistening water a small bubble of laughter escaping her body. There was nothing to tear her away from this beauty, this perfection and as she watched the rest of the blood red sun drift below the horizon, she sighed. The sky turning darker red, crimson, violet, indigo... She stood, taking one final look over her shoulder at the now lonely lake, the stars peeking from their hiding places and reflecting in the now dark water. She sighed once more, turning and climbing the steep hill to her cottage...her cottage on the lake.
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