Wow. That's so true and the way you expressed it is so poetically beautiful. It really reveals the power of having a best friend to share life with... and the end is so sad.

I enjoyed the metaphore and meaning of this. I really like it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

wow. Thats beautiful.

Very nice idea, great use of metaphors! I don't have anything deep and profound to say, as this was simple, but I like that a lot. Perhaps it could be expanded on, but it's just peachy the way it is. :) Good work! Keep writing! ~MJ