I like it, its kinda rhym-ish and its really well written

I feel like that when it comes to some relitives...Good Job

I know exactly how you feel, doll. Hang in there. Oh, and the first several lines are very good! They rhyme so nicely and have a such a nice ring to them! I know it won't be okay 'til we get to heaven, but 'til then, at least we have each other! Love, ~*Mettie*~