It is such a sweet love story and you capture the pure goodness of ther words.Luvs and Hugs,Serpentyna

Aw, very funny - my only comment is that you spelled fairy oddly. It's usually fairy, but your spelling might technically be correct also. Again, good work.

heehee this is so cool! Why'd you stress so much the fact that her hair was the colour of flaxen hay? Reminds me of cows. ANYWAY good poem, very cute, keep it up!

Crimson Gold

This is great! It has a ring of ballad to it. I feel like this would be awesome told around a fireplace.In a couple lines later on I felt the rhymn was a bit forced, but it didn't bother me enough for me to suggest that you change them.

A great rendition of the disney classic, good job!