I seem to be reading a lot of upsetting stuff tonight. Either way, after you reviewed my poem, I thought to come have a look at your profile and this jumped out at me. My friend didn't kill himself, but was killed in a car accident by a drunken driver (incidentally, his "friend", who wouldn't hear of anyone else driving his car). I thought I'd be able to relate to your emotions and I really can. It even has made me think about releasing some of the poetry I wrote for Josh. Thank you for sharing - you have an amazing voice. I will be reading more.

A first this poem caught my eye because i also have a poem called 'My Peace'. This is wonderfully written, well done.

Not bad freeverse I like it! Good job...

I'm sorry about your loss. This is a really nice poem and is very well-written.