This was beautiful, eloquently told, and simply breathtaking in its scope. I like the way that you evoke this amazing imagery within the reader's mind with your words, and it has that morbid and dark touch to it that makes it your trademark work. You're definitely a prodigious poet (keep doing work like this and I'm going to eventually run out of adjectives to say for you! Stop it, lol!) Anyway, really nice job on this one, and just using different analogies for hands is an accomplishment in itself. Nice job.

chibichocobo

_ Very pretty, your visuals are amazing as usual. XD I love your work oh great one!

Thank you for the review. _ )

nice kinda reminds me of Macbeth in the beginning..

alwaysFTT

This rocks! They way you use the hands to symbolise so much is amazing! Go you! QueenVixta x x x

Wow. So powerful. I loved it. Absoultely loved it!

oh nice and good. you have good describtion, though there were like...two, i belive, grammar and spelling mistakes. like you said 'niave' instead of 'naive', but whatever. good poem, nevertheless

nice poem. i like this. profound and touching. beautiful. nice work.

wow, awesome! never ceasing to amaze me!

yeah... a hand can mean so much... *shutters* it's a negative image for me though, i can't help that.

GIRL! U R ONE HECK OF A POET! THIS IS REALLY AWESOME WORK!

beautiful...

ah yes, finally i've found a decent poem, yes I love this, metaphors are awesome and beautifully written. -ADD

I love your many personalities of hands!

interesting.. nciely written

I like how you use the image of hands in different ways in this poem. I felt it was really powerful. Nice job! Keep up the good work! Always be yourself! -Elena