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Cloud Burst
2005-04-09
ch 1,
love with an undercurrent of menace and darkness. this was great!
wordsworth in a garbage can
2005-02-20
ch 1,
Do I sense some resentment in here? heheh. No, it was a good poem. Honestly- I think you're a talented writer. Keep writing!
shadowz-333
2005-02-20
ch 1,
Wow, this one is great! I really like this!
simpleplan13
2005-02-18
ch 1,
lol.. taht was funny
DukDog27
2005-02-18
ch 1,
Although it's probably not the response you were going for, I burst into horrid, uncontrolable laughter when I finished reading it. A well done work that has alerted me to the fact I may need phychiatric help, say thankee.
hiding behind amber eyes
2005-02-18
ch 1,
wow Aaron, like the metaphors. creepy...i'm going to have to get you to explain this one! good job though
dustytiger
2005-02-17
ch 1,
great peice, i think i know someone who feels exactly this about me right now... thank you for sharing
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