love with an undercurrent of menace and darkness. this was great!

Do I sense some resentment in here? heheh. No, it was a good poem. Honestly- I think you're a talented writer. Keep writing!

Wow, this one is great! I really like this!

lol.. taht was funny

Although it's probably not the response you were going for, I burst into horrid, uncontrolable laughter when I finished reading it. A well done work that has alerted me to the fact I may need phychiatric help, say thankee.

wow Aaron, like the metaphors. creepy...i'm going to have to get you to explain this one! good job though

great peice, i think i know someone who feels exactly this about me right now... thank you for sharing