Pretty and magical. Reminds me of...a light purple with little golden star shaped speckels...just a touch of that, though, like a thumb print dragged on a paper with that design. Outside on a starry night. WIth love and stuff. I dunno what I'm talking about, but it invoked a mystical feeling in me and that was just myself projecting it into a nonsensical image. =P

Wow, that was an amazing poem. It was beautiful, from beginning to end, easy to follow and very descriptive and just plain /beautiful/. I think these were my favorite lines:

"Let us light up the night with our endless sea,Beyond the stretches of eternity;For this night is our own, and with it our glory,Our magic alive in this never-ending story. "

Anyway, again, amazing job. :D

Excellent poem. It gives me the same hope and happiness I feel when I look at the stars. I love the rhyming meter and its symbolism. I like this poem a lot. =)

pretty good for a poem that rhymes(*twitch* sorry I don't like rhyming poems)

Very nice! I loved the stanza, 'Show me the passion of your infinite glow.' You communicate powerful imagery without using too many words, which is a great skill.

I love this poem... astonishing... I love nature as well! Nature inspires me in many ways... especially the stars.

This is a wonderful little poem.

Good meter, too.

Keep up the good work!!

Beautifully written, such vivid imagry, excellent word flow and the rhyme scheme is superb. Keep up the great writings!