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| deathtotal9 2006-03-29 ch 1,   | Ah I have a weakness for poems that end on such a sour and depressing note. Nicely done, once again. P.S. Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews =) To answer your question about "Hole of Doom", I just wrote about the first silly idea that popped into my head. |
| Kenishiro 2005-04-06 ch 1, | Brilliant! such a tragic and sad piece of poetry, keep up the good work! |
| Amy Zincalo 2005-03-25 ch 1, | Short but it said a lot. I don't know if you get what I mean. Ok, I'll translate it... I really like this poem. Hey, thanks for the beautiful review (Bedda Matri) and adding it in your favorites. |
| in theory 2005-03-18 ch 1, | The third line of this makes it stand out very boldly from other similar poems I've read. I was surprised, nicely. |
| Cloud Burst 2005-02-26 ch 1, | simple yet effective - nice job! |
| Kat Cyr 2005-02-18 ch 1, | I liked it very much. Keep writting... |
| Sinner By Nature 2005-02-18 ch 1, | nice rhymes, and words, and ofcourse great poem. |