|Reviews for AS IF THROUGH A GLASS AND DARKLY COMPLETE FEB 17|
| dreamshell 7/4/07 . chapter 1
Breezing through this, it seems like it might be quite the story. However... imposing, much? You might want to break this down into chapters for that "easier to swallow" appeal. People (me, included) are much more apt to flock to stories when they feel they can get at least one chapter out of a larger work read in one sitting. Not to tell you how to write your own stories or anything, but if you gave this an edit and I would definitely take a crack at it. ;)
| Wesley The Dark Prince 1/20/06 . chapter 1
Lose the caps and the whorish self-promotion. Who reviews their own story?
| Poor Richard's Son 9/23/05 . chapter 1
best story I've ever