 magicbubble 2005-03-28 . chapter 1the fantasies are relived!! i like it a lot. romanticizing childhood. that rocks! |
 linaeve 2005-03-25 . chapter 1excuse me while i go re-attach my jaw.
okay. wow. yeah. loved the allitereation and imagery and abstractions... beautiful. |
 really 2005-03-18 . chapter 1beautiful and it's an old look at an old thing in a new way. (: |
 reicheruu. 2005-03-10 . chapter 1 ooh it sounds so pretty yeah (: hahass. wonder what goes on in your mind sometimes. i liked the part about horses and airplanes. heh.
reicheru! |
 Cyssel 2005-03-06 . chapter 1I love the imagery and the way you've described everything. Good command of vocabulary, certainly. |
 negligible fictional force 2005-02-20 . chapter 1oh my god this is is pure beauty. i am enlightened. -kismet. |
 anonymous 2005-02-18 . chapter 1 JOLLY GOOD. except that since this is about nightMARES it shouldnt be STALLIONS of the night. but i guess its alright. |
 HideAwayFairy 2005-02-18 . chapter 1Beautiful and entrancing, I absolutely love it. I love the thought of the stallions bringing you away to dreams, it contrasts w/my poem The Nightmare. Wonderful work! |
 wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-18 . chapter 1very unique and intriguing. loved the part about the horses...really, excellent work. |