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magicbubble
2005-03-28
ch 1,
abusethe fantasies are relived!! i like it a lot. romanticizing childhood. that rocks!
linaeve
2005-03-25
ch 1,
abuseexcuse me while i go re-attach my jaw.

okay. wow. yeah. loved the allitereation and imagery and abstractions... beautiful.
really
2005-03-18
ch 1,
abusebeautiful and it's an old look at an old thing in a new way. (:
reicheruu.
2005-03-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseooh it sounds so pretty yeah (: hahass. wonder what goes on in your mind sometimes. i liked the part about horses and airplanes. heh.

reicheru!
Cyssel
2005-03-06
ch 1,
abuseI love the imagery and the way you've described everything. Good command of vocabulary, certainly.
negligible fictional force
2005-02-20
ch 1,
abuseoh my god this is is pure beauty. i am enlightened. -kismet.
anonymous
2005-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseJOLLY GOOD. except that since this is about nightMARES it shouldnt be STALLIONS of the night. but i guess its alright.
HideAwayFairy
2005-02-18
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful and entrancing, I absolutely love it. I love the thought of the stallions bringing you away to dreams, it contrasts w/my poem The Nightmare. Wonderful work!
wordsworth in a garbage can
2005-02-18
ch 1,
abusevery unique and intriguing. loved the part about the horses...really, excellent work.
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