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| magicbubble 2005-03-28 ch 1,  | abusethe fantasies are relived!! i like it a lot. romanticizing childhood. that rocks! |
| linaeve 2005-03-25 ch 1, | abuseexcuse me while i go re-attach my jaw. okay. wow. yeah. loved the allitereation and imagery and abstractions... beautiful. |
| really 2005-03-18 ch 1, | abusebeautiful and it's an old look at an old thing in a new way. (: |
| reicheruu. 2005-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseooh it sounds so pretty yeah (: hahass. wonder what goes on in your mind sometimes. i liked the part about horses and airplanes. heh. reicheru! |
| Cyssel 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery and the way you've described everything. Good command of vocabulary, certainly. |
| negligible fictional force 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseoh my god this is is pure beauty. i am enlightened. -kismet. |
| anonymous 2005-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseJOLLY GOOD. except that since this is about nightMARES it shouldnt be STALLIONS of the night. but i guess its alright. |
| HideAwayFairy 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and entrancing, I absolutely love it. I love the thought of the stallions bringing you away to dreams, it contrasts w/my poem The Nightmare. Wonderful work! |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abusevery unique and intriguing. loved the part about the horses...really, excellent work. |