the fantasies are relived!! i like it a lot. romanticizing childhood. that rocks!

excuse me while i go re-attach my jaw.

okay. wow. yeah. loved the allitereation and imagery and abstractions... beautiful.

beautiful and it's an old look at an old thing in a new way. (:

ooh it sounds so pretty yeah (: hahass. wonder what goes on in your mind sometimes. i liked the part about horses and airplanes. heh.

reicheru!

I love the imagery and the way you've described everything. Good command of vocabulary, certainly.

oh my god this is is pure beauty. i am enlightened. -kismet.

JOLLY GOOD. except that since this is about nightMARES it shouldnt be STALLIONS of the night. but i guess its alright.

Beautiful and entrancing, I absolutely love it. I love the thought of the stallions bringing you away to dreams, it contrasts w/my poem The Nightmare. Wonderful work!

very unique and intriguing. loved the part about the horses...really, excellent work.