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| bex17 2005-12-15 ch 1,  | abuseI meant that it's a good thing you're writing from a mom's POV. |
| pianogal 2005-08-01 ch 9, | abuseit was a great story! i loved it. hmm, i hope the baby comes out being a boy to make Matthew happy. great job and i'm sad its over. this story definetely wasn't a dud. i thought it was a great storyline and you wrote it well. Kim |
| SitaTheLastVampire 2005-08-01 ch 9, | abuseNice end, who told you that this story was a total dud?Anyway, I liked this one! |
| SitaTheLastVampire 2005-07-31 ch 8, | abuseSWEET |
| pianogal 2005-07-31 ch 8, | abuseawe, it wasn't cheesy. it was very sweet! i'm not really sure how the beginning of this chapter really fit in but i still thought it was great. you're doing an awesome job with this story. Kim |
| SitaTheLastVampire 2005-07-30 ch 7, | abuseread the 7 chapters, wonderful!Liked the story |
| pianogal 2005-07-29 ch 7, | abuseawe, he admitted how he felt and she admitted how she felt and now they are kissing. that is just so sweet. i really am wondering where you are going to go next with this. i can't wait. great job! Kim |
| pianogal 2005-07-29 ch 4, | abuseawe, this is great. they both love eachother, now hopefully pretty soon they will just admit it. this is a great story and i can not what to read more of it. great job! Kim |
| aMeRiCa'S-nExT-tOp-MoDeL- 2005-02-26 ch 9, | abusehey this one is so cute...i get chills in the spine while im reading it... |
| darqlyte 2005-02-25 ch 9, | abuseWell done. All your stories are very good. You could write a sequel, but you would need a plot for it, perhaps some sort of thing comes between them. God Bless. -Blaeyk Q'ohle Darqlyte |
| Lucy Grace 2005-02-25 ch 9, | abuseGreat, but kinda abrupt, don't you agree?... |
| Lucy Grace 2005-02-24 ch 8, | abuseYAY! Lol... I love this story! |
| darqlyte 2005-02-18 ch 2, | abuseIt's good. Definately write this one. By all means, write away. God Bless. -Blaek Q'ohle Darqlyte |
| arachibutyrophobia 2005-02-18 ch 2, | abusegood chappie! the background info was good - enough that you get the idea but not overbearing in deets - one thing is you say that she didn tell him she was pregnant but she wasnt sure why - that should be deeper because thats a huge turning point in her life, maybe more insights as to how she was feeling when she kept her mouth shut about the pregnancy. update, please! ~birdytamel~ |
| arachibutyrophobia 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abusewow, dramatic first chappie! Maybe there could be more background information in the next chappie, i'm VERY curious at their marriage... Poor Matthew, must have been a shock for him ^^ ~birdytamel~ |