very sad & well written

This is very sad...:( Do I know who this is about? I think the rhyming throws off the rythem, but you obivously worked for it. I personally dont care for rhyming scheems that go one rhyme and then the same, lest, a variation. Pretty Good.

*Amber*

That sucks... Cooly written though...!

If you want me to read some more of your stuff. Read some of mine. And don't forget the chapter book I'm working on! When I get five more reveiws I'll post the next chapter... It called Tala the Mysterious!