I'm a little confused. Each time I thought I'd figured it out, rereading it proved otherwise. I enjoyed it, and even though it doesn't make sense (to me), which is normally bad, it worked. I like the format for this, and I'm requesting that you do anothe work like this. It's meaningful to me though I can't find the meaning. You've got so much talent.

I enjoyed this piece and you really made it work. Its interesting to read and makes the reader think, two things in one. Great job=)

~Ellesmere~p.s-thnx 4 tha review

m...thought provoking. I was a bit confused about the different separations in the speech, but it took nothing from the piece. I merely interpreted it in my own way. (I suppose that's how poetry's meant to be.) But anyway, nice piece.

-LPC

Interesting piece...it's interesting how you can simply have dialogue but picture the people in front of you...even with just those three snippets of dialogue, I got a good sense of each person's character...I wonder what makes the person "different"...hm...anyway...great piece, it really is just like I was easedropping on three conversations...keep writing!

This is cool. Makes me think. Great job.

Eh, keep writing. More stuff like this will make fictionpress.com a TON better. It's already good. But in my opinion...you get what I'm saying.

Keep it up.

-paige :)

p.s. Wo0t.