Short but powerful.

You really need to come up for a name for this one! It's short but very powerful!

i really like the magic and the mythology that you bring in to your descriptions of nature! i like your work

I'd Call it Gaia something... ;; Lots of imagery... And the metaphor of the mother's womb makes a good point. Good show!

the Mistress Joe

"No, no, no! My name is Mistress Joe!"

"Fine, 'MISTRESS'."

"See it doesn't work with you... (."

Ooh this is so mother earthish :) How about the title being something to do with that or elements. Has a great feel to it this poem. Well done!