|Reviews for Untitled|
| this is my love for you 3/12/05 . chapter 1
Short but powerful.
| Luki Dimension 2/18/05 . chapter 1
You really need to come up for a name for this one! It's short but very powerful!
| Sunflower dream 2/18/05 . chapter 1
i really like the magic and the mythology that you bring in to your descriptions of nature! i like your work
| Le Rose Clair du Nuit 2/18/05 . chapter 1
I'd Call it Gaia something... ;; Lots of imagery... And the metaphor of the mother's womb makes a good point. Good show!
the Mistress Joe
"No, no, no! My name is Mistress Joe!"
"See it doesn't work with you... (."
| elvenstorm 2/18/05 . chapter 1
Ooh this is so mother earthish :) How about the title being something to do with that or elements. Has a great feel to it this poem. Well done!