great poem! loved this for being so unique. the vocab and imagery is just amazing! wonderful work! plus thanx for the review but do u really believe in friendships always coming to an end sooner or later? i disagree with u on that point but maybe i just dont hav the experience or summit. i guess i'd like 2 believe that atleast 1 friend would remain true 2 me for all my life. anyway, thanx for the heads up. once again, amazing poem, short but full of imagery! well done!

'Reverance' is different from what I've read so far, but its definitely my favourite. However, I don't think the last line is necessary. It breaks off the pattern and the flow of what was already a near perfect poem.