oh wow...very spooky, and yet sadly true (if only everyone were saved...) btw, you are a very mature writer for your age, and i am thoroughly impressed (which is hard to do, because i read A LOT...) well, keep up the good work, and keep spreading His word (i think you've found your life's calling)

Huhm? I'm confused...why are people vanishing?

Great job! I like the ryming and you have a pretty good rhythm for a long poem... i have a feeling it's based off the Left Behind books? If it is, then you've done something i've tried and couldn't... so anyway, great job and keep it up!

Lauren

*claps* That was very good. It really touched me. Keep up the good work.

Ohers. Shakey Earth... o_O

Sorry that the reviews are strange. *glances at coke bottle* *cough*

Skiv

YAY FOR KEVIN! *jigs*

I likes it. I told you I'm bad at reviews.

Skiv