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Reviews For: Hanging In Air
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-07 . chapter 1
Ah, I like this. "slant of the wing" Nice.
Calliope Foster 2005-03-18 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so awesome. Sometimes I don't like Haiku, but yours has a good rhythm and provacative nature. Good work! Keep in touch review wise!
Ruka K 2005-02-25 . chapter 1
That is a cool thought.
somefreakylooknchick 2005-02-19 . chapter 1
wow! this is amazing.
Rocky G 2005-02-18 . chapter 1
Very cool Haiku, I like the concept.

Rocky :)
Ahrar 2005-02-18 . chapter 1
Hey, that was cool, Hershey. Usually I'm not too into Haikus (they always kinda come across to me as being trite) but this is cool, because it's something to think about: That troubles are sometimes a matter of perspective.Good stuff, as always, M'Lady.*Bows*_Ahrar
An-Author-At-Heart 2005-02-18 . chapter 1
Short, simple but sweet - it was nice. I never really thought of the idea you portray: how flying and falling are the same but it depends on the slant of the wings. Isn't that some food for thought! You make the reader think, I like that. It was also put nicely into a haiku, a specific kind of poem that shows the knowledge of poetry of the writer. Good job, keep it up.
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