is this the end? it is really good but i was kind of hoping for more. shouldn't Jamie find a "middle ground" like most stories do? or do you want to prove a point by leaving Jamie in hell? i see that this could continue further but it is your choice and i can only ask you to continue.

TheAngelofredemption

Finally an original storyline! Lol! This is pretty good! Looking forward to reading more of it! OceanFrost

This is very interesting! And I love the title.

Oh, and thanks for reviewing my story, sorry it took so long to reply.

I like it so far. Kind of twisted, but an interesting idea. I would work on editing and grammar and not using abbreviations--but you already know that, don't you? Thanks for reviewing me by the way.

Good work. Though, you should proofread and edit some more, for you make many technical errors as the story progresses.

I think your idea is a good one, though I myself have been turned off of that type of plot, don't know why, I just am.

I don't think I've ever read anything so dark, however, I'm finding it very very intriguing. I can't wait to read more of it. I'm curious to see if Jamie's views will change or if he'll just become a puppet. May good writings continue to you. ~Moni jane

I like how your story is going so far. It flows, making it an easy read. Just watch the grammar. It's "soul" not "sole". And take another look t Jamie's parents. When he was returned to Earth and he saw them on TV... I don't know. It just seemed unnatural. Even if his parents didn't care one bit, they would have pretended on national TV. Otherwise, they could be charged of neglect or accused of driving Jamie to his suicide. I don't know. It just seemed off to me. Otherwise, I love Jamie. I think you've developed his character very well and the description is great. It's almost like a scene playing out in my head. I see everything clearly.
Keep up the good work!

Very interesting story and a lot of creativity. Please continue writing and good luck with your future creations.

Thank you for the review! (Species) Much appreciation.

Very intresting...it was a really good chappie! All I can say is wow.

UntIl NeXt Time

LoVe Ya

Niki!!

PS: Thanks 4 R&R Working for Affection.

Thank you for the review!

I really love the idea behind this story. The only thing I'm wondering about is if Jamie wants to stop the pain of innocents why does he kill the cop and nurse? Anyways I love the details and I'm really looking forward to what is coming next.

You reviewed my story so I thought I'd review yours.

I only had time to read the first couple chapters but it's quite interesting and well done, and very unique for a online fiction site.

cheers

It's folded into a fairly decent story so far. It's been progressing for a long time, but I like it. I"m about to go eat out, (tomorrow's my B-day, but we eat tonight) so I'll have to read the rest of this later. Thank you for the review, I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.

HOLY FLIPPING **! You used my edits. O_O
I'm SO honored. Ah, like I told you on Myspace, I'm so damn jealous of you.

I love your descriptions. They're hella vivid. I love the whole damn chapter actually.
XOXO,
that one short Asian.

Nice story. (Yeah, it's the random girl from myspace.) I noticed a few typos in the chapters but it's no biggie :) Is the cutting girl's name Posta? (Too many typos with her name.) I love how descriptive this is and so realistic in a way. Anyway, update!~AIAK~

It's a very interesting seeing things from this character's point of view. I like it.