oo i feel the hatred

Um, Anya, this is kinda scary. I mean it's good and everything, but... Though its perfect rendition of it done by someone whos never gone through it before ... i hope! *giggle* luv your Dancing Tear (aka Nessa)

Wow...gorey graphic images and an overall very powerful poem...keep writing!

That is really sad. But the thing is that is reality. You really took what happens and put it into a short amount of words. Good job!