oh wow, that was beautifully written. i liked it a lot. last stanza was the best. greay job!

That was well written. The words seemed fumbled together at some points, but it was good you could tell that there was emotion in this poem. Anyways

Bbye

*WF

I especially like the first two stanzas. I have brown recluse spiders all over the place where I live, and I don't like them much myself *shudders*. I don't think this poem really belongs under the fantasy category, but it doesn't matter, it's still good.