Beautiful piece...especially the last stanza! Keep writing =D

beautiful... id call it rain

The last stanza really is powerful. You can clearly get the image in your head. Well done, this is beautiful.

[but the rain is a deceiveracid looks beautifulwhen it hides amidst glitterit mixes with the tears on my faceand they hide each other]

That is so beautiful. The imagery is heart wrenching.

Thanks for reviewing my poem 'The Unforgiven' I appreciated it =)

This is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery, and the metaphors used. Thankyou so so much for reviewing my poem, so happy you liked it because most people don't like that sort of darkish stuff. Your poem is very very good as well... Excellent. It's added to my favs list!

Hey! i really really like this poem. One of the best i have read so far. So keep up the good work and keep on posting your writings. Oh and, thanks for the review! i'm glad you liked mine!

nicely done. interesting how you chose to only capitalize the middle stanza. heh, i never really had to deal with acid rain, but sounds .. special. new way of using an old cliche, i like it.oh ya, thanks for the review on my sleep deprived ramblings haha

Wow, very good, keep up the good work! and thanks for the reviews, x weasel within x

wow! deep. seriously awesome. i liked the line:

"Acid looks beautiful/When it hides amidst glitter"

Keep writing: it can only make you better.

-dare to dream-

woah, deep. I love this poem, excellent write. Vivid descriptions are brilliant. Love the line, 'dancing against my face'. good job, keep it up

This is good! I think you could have phrased a few things differently like "the rain deceives" instead of "the rain is a deceiver" sounds awkward, but nice description

Excellent! I like the imagery, and the message is cool too.