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CreativeChick233
2008-10-04
ch 13,
abusei loved itt
absoloutely adorable =]
dawn's unforgiving darkness
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abusehha
dawn's unforgiving darkness
2006-08-28
ch 14,
abusethat was so cute!
dawn's unforgiving darkness
2006-08-28
ch 13,
abusewhat's taht song?
The Latest Plague
2006-03-10
ch 5,
abuseThis story is soo funny! im adding this to my favorites list... ha ha ha
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 14,
abuseI thought that was so sweetly-corny! I loved that ending! I agree, the whole story went by really fast, but I thought this whole story was a great skeleton for a larger story! The possiblities are endless!

So happy I found this story!

GOod Night!
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 13,
abuse"It’s scary, because right then I realized I had never hated him. Not even a little bit." That was so sweet! I KNEW she never really hated him!

I thought that ending was just adorable. And I really loved that song!
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 12,
abuseMOntster child! Horrible!

I love her appetite. Her daydreams are very amusing!

Great chapter.

NOw I'm watching "Nausiccaa of the Valley of the Wind"-Ugh, I can't spell properly tonight!
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 11,
abuse“I guess I was just really mad at you for saying you didn’t like it when you did"-So sweet that THAT is why he was feeling hurt! He didn't like that she was lying to herself and him on her feelings!

Very cute chapter! I'm glad it didn't take a long-drawn out process to mend the damage of the Dance kiss.

Poor KAte! I love how Sam comes running over to help while He's supposed to be practising Football!

Great chapter.

I'm reading this great book series by Elizabeth Ann Scarborough. The first book is called The Godmother, and the sequal(what I'm reading right now) is called The Godmother's Apprentice. I don't know why, but I think you would like it.

Bye.!.
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 10,
abuse"He looks at me as if I just put a gun to his head and fired. I fidget with my dress, not sure if I did the right thing.

His eyes turned from being filled with misery to being clouded over in anger.

“You know what, you’re right. I don’t know why I even bothered” he said in a dangerously soft tone."-Just goes to show, you can only push a guy away for so long, before they REALLY go away-stupid "Hard to get" games are just mean.I mean, if you like the other person, but want to toy with their feelings, and making them run laps to win you, you don't REALLY care for them, and are really just mean and horrible.

Yet, I don't thing Kate was TRYING to do that, she wasn't really sure of her feelings for Sam, all she knew was that all his attention had gotten her was confused, picked on by the schools populous, and exploited from her best friend.

I liked this chapter. Poor Kate! Poor Sam! Not poor Lizzie-I mean, why the hell did she THINK Sam was at Kate's house. To visit LIzzie?! NO-Kate lives there, so if anything, Kate should be angry that Lizzie was spying and trying to steal Sam's attention.

Bye!
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 9,
abuseI don't think Lizzie and Kate are as good friends as Kate seems to think.

I really liked this chapter-it would have been funny if she actually commented about "Freak Dies head over heals-literally" to Sam, just to see his reaction.
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 8,
abuseANother life and death experience for Sailor Moon (Mostly death-but, she was revived when Tuxedo kissed her with the dew of his child hood friend's flower of life-hey, the kid IS an alien~)

I love how she punches Bulky! Sam was SO doing that PDA with that girl just to make KAte jealous. Was he in on the hazing in anyway? I mean, he acts as if he can make it stop instantly if he says the word, so maybe he planned it that way so he could be KAtes' Knight and save her! ALthough, that sounds more like a villain's idea of winning a girl over, rather than the heros'. ANd on yet another alien/mutated third hand, Jocks are not exactly what I would call hero.

Great chapter.
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 7,
abuseI think it should either be a nice little velvety black, or a slightly shimmering red tango dress, that is tight to the waist, and flares, and cuts at a slant against her leg.

I like Lizzie, and how she gives as good as she gets.

NIce cahpter-Oh no! It's the part where Sailor Moon Almost dies because her boyfriend, tuxedo mask's old child hood friend is extremly jealous of Sailor Moon, so he almost stabs her. Luckily, Tuxedo saves her just in time!

SOrry-I love that part!
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 6,
abuseI love Sailor Moon-I'm "Watching" Promise of the Rose (the first Sailor Moon movie) as I read this story.

Anyway, very cute chapter. I love the awkwardness-and an happy that Kate didn't let Smug Monkey kiss her just then>.
Water Block
2006-01-15
ch 5,
abuseKate reminds me of Jennifer Connelly, when she played Sarah from Labryinth, because of how she looks-and her outsider-y nature.

I don't know who Sam reminds me of-maybe Cary Elwes-when he played Wesley in The Princess Bride. He's so cute!

I loved this chapter! Poor Kate. (Her turn to get pity!)
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