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Risto 2005-06-23 . chapter 1
wow ur good... so it just started raining and u thought of it.. wow...
Icthoid Matro Coselos 2005-05-26 . chapter 1
wow... seriously.. this is beautifull... just wow... my heart is beating faster right now... just wow.
Sharakinpaix 2005-03-28 . chapter 1
"Whispering to me | with an eerie sigh" is one of the best lines ever! Now I know what to say when people ask me why I like rain. Seriously though, very beautiful... "stormy haze," what a beautiful image!
erinmarie89 2005-03-08 . chapter 1
much wisdom will come to those who will stop and take the time to listen to the rain ~love is all you need~
Greenwitch 2005-03-07 . chapter 1
wow, this is pretty! i especially like the line "Speaking to anyone who will listen to their words." good job! and thanks for reviewing my poem. ^_^~greenwitch
GravitationDreams 2005-03-02 . chapter 1
Very nice poem. ^_^ I personally love the rain, and you captured the essence of a dark, stormy day quite well. I like the last stanza the best; it has very nice wording. Great job!
Ethereal Kisses 2005-03-02 . chapter 1
Hi again, I often leave multiple reviews!

I liked this poem a lot, I've always loved rain. The emotions you bring up (at least in me) in this poem are very deep and moving, and the descripition is flawless! Well done and keep writing!

~ Ethereal Kisses ~
silversilence16 2005-02-25 . chapter 1
Hey, I thought your poem was really pretty. It was very meaningful. I love poetry that makes you think. It kinda asks you to put yourself into it and imagine everything. Plus I love a nice rainy day, lol. Nice job and thanx much for your review! ^_^
simpleplan13 2005-02-24 . chapter 1
i really liek it.. the repition is nice and its very true.. great job,.. tahnks for your review :)
Surreptitiously Scarlet 2005-02-24 . chapter 1
that's really good! It just sort of gives you like this picture in your mind and i can't even explain it. i really liked it.
Fae Hines 2005-02-23 . chapter 1
One thing to say: bravo. Bien, bien, n'arrette pas!
Obsidian Eyes 2005-02-23 . chapter 1
Beautiful! You think my poems are good? Take a look at your own! Each line in this was perfect. Wow. If you have the time, read my newest poem. Coincidently it includes rain =) Ill review more of your work soon!!
-The Empress of the Orient- 2005-02-22 . chapter 1
hey i first learned this along time ago that u get a lot more reviews if u except anonymus reviews just a pointer.

nice poem and at first it ryhmed and then it didn't srry for the spelling. . .i like yur free verse it was realli good!! keep writing! ^_^!

oh and thanks for the review!
Renada 2005-02-22 . chapter 1
I'm reviewing at your request, though, I would have anyways. I always return the favor. ~_^ Anyways, I loved this piece! It flowed beautifully and the imagery and other personifications were wonderful! I'm going to have to check out some of your other works. ^_^Ren
Elizabeth Warner 2005-02-21 . chapter 1
0_0 purty... I like the ending! ^^ u write good poems! Ohh.. and thankie for the review on mine, but ANWAYS, your is very prettyness. It ryhmes at some parts. My friend would like it. XD He didn't like mine because it didn't rhyme anywhere. lol. I like the line: "Leaving me in a graceless daze" the best. Ok, I'm done rambling on. wonderful poem!
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