WOW, that is indeed mind-boggling and I have a theory but my theories never amount to much, but anyways. You are amazing. This has been added to my favourites. ^^

Hm...I'd have to say this is the most confusing poem I've ever read. I have a bit of an idea of what it is about, but I think I'm going to come back and read it again some time in the near future to get a better understanding of what you're saying. (I get the distinct impression the speaker isn't happy with the world at the very least.) I do hope you have more poetry like this. I love a good written challenge to decipher. This poem in simple terms...kicks **!SCORE: 10/10

The Critic, Devil Dragon of Pain

Very beautiful poem, I have little to no idea of its meaning though, but I suppose thats why I got a 60 on that English assignment! Anyway, as others have said, I love the style of the poem, and keeping the meaning elusive from us has really brought out the great qualities of it. Please keep up the good work

Wonderful poem, and I think I have a good idea of what the poem is about, but I don't want to make a fool of myself with my opinion. Plus, I love your style, I have a friend who has a very similar style and I absolutely love it. Keep up the poetry...