very interesting, seriously. very different and original. nice work!

wow... That was a really interesting poem. I REALLY enjoyed reading that peice. I like how you can compare This person to a moth... and just...wow.

-GlassRose20

This poem hits where it hurts... direct, effective, and emotional. Good work.

It's really good.. Was this a personal experience or was is something you jsut happened to notice..? It sounds like something I can relate to in a sense... It's really good! I hope to continue reading your work! Ja Ne!

...nice interpretation love, though it's saddening.

Very well done...very relatable