Reviews for Never Diamonds, Nor Champagne

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Scorpius Malfoy 2007-12-02 ch 1,	"I really liked that". Really, that's one of the things I've always been afraid of happening to me. The last line was wonderful.
cls81690 2007-11-19 ch 1,	"I really liked that" I'd hit send review now, but it's actually "submit review," and I truly genuinely enjoyed it so I want to say a little more. The last line, with "never, ever", was especially great. The entire writing style of the poem fit its subject, in a way that I have trouble describing. I don't know if you wrote the poem about yourself or not. Could be fact or fiction. But in any case, I wish you the best of love.
The Abstract Dualist 2007-06-09 ch 1,	That was... good. It hit some of the more interestingly subtle points of human relationships, but I note that you did not comment on how the relationship could grow into... is "true love" the right phrase? Meh. Very nice poem.
Silken Silver Berries 2007-05-12 ch 1,	oh wow...i feel so sad for you. ..and for me, actually. i know exactly how you feel! ironically this relates so perfectly to how i've been feeling about things lately..not necessarily in the romance portion of my life (although that is also lacking miserably) ..but more in the "is my live ever going to mean anything to anyone??" kind of way. i am sharply and almost painfully aware that my identity crisis actually has very little to do with what the subject of this poem is..but i can relate so completely to what you are saying. hug ...hug, hug, hug lol..hopefully things have looked up for you by now. *ssb
For What Its Worth 2006-07-14 ch 1,	an interesting poem. I liked it.
Basara 2006-05-21 ch 1,	well...um...I'm a guy and not much of an empath but...I like your poem...well at least I know how a girl/woman feels at times...least I got a hint so thanks! =)
G.Whitney 2006-05-08 ch 1,	I really loved it a lot, I could relate.
from beneath the bell jar 2006-03-26 ch 1,	This was the worst, or best depending on how you look at it, time for me to read this poem. Simply because it is exactly how I'm feeling right now. I am this close to tears. This poem had a lot of well-portrayed emotions - hopelessnes, desperation, longing...I thought the idea was very well carried out. Esp. the last line - very powerful. Great piece.
End-of-forever 2005-12-06 ch 1,	I not only really liked the poem, but I understand the thought behind it.I know how this feels.I always joked to my friends that I'm either going to be single my whole life, or end up married to a boring man, spending my time raising boring, contented children, always wondering what it is I'm missing.anyhoo, excellent poem. I really like your writing style.
Sarrasanne 2005-10-22 ch 1,	I really liked that luv Isi ps- i can so relate! it's a weird feeling, isn't it?
Boadicia 2005-09-14 ch 1,	Very, very nice, with a lovely ending. I like the whole basis of the poem. One thing that might make it easier to read, though, is to make the lines a bit longer, and don't let them get shorter than three words, unless you really want to set that phrase apart. That's just what I've found to flow better. Keep it up.
anon 2005-09-11 ch 1,	:D
Fiorenza 2005-06-21 ch 1,	Good Morning! How are you? I'm fine. Anyways, to the poem. I have never particularly cared for one-word lines. They just kind of seem choppy. But then, my poems are all long and invariably full of elaborate word selections. You know, my friends and I like the nerdy quiet guys, (okay, my Dad and brothers are kind of that way too) so if you don't like the nerdy guys, just think, there are some girls who would like them. Wink. By the way, you have an amusing bio. ~Fireflower
Rose 2005-06-11 ch 1,	Expresses exactly how I feel (sometimes). I really, really liked the last line "And I will never, ever scream out loud." Even though I usually don't like poetry, this touched my heart. (Sorry for sounding CORNY)
dream of flying 2005-05-24 ch 1,	i really liked that. It reminded me a lot of my life, so I guess it has good appeal to the general public (if, by the general public, you mean me.) that made no sense. screw it. good job.

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