"Then again, the marks you cause, they are all ours" - awesome line!

"Tangled up and stripping my of flight" - typo - me of flight maybe?

Great poem.

-Write on!

Ash this one is really good i dont exactly know what your inspiration has been for these past few ones but whatever it is it is making you write very well. I like it. bye

Sque! I really like this one! It's got a cool vibe about it... perhaps written for "Spike?"... anywho, this one's got a rhyme scheme! That's a new one for you! Sorry, Ash, just never notice one before this one! -sigh- I love this one! OK, gots to goes... bye bye luv ya lots!Livin In the SubZero,Tatianna Blusummers