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| The Random Witness 2005-06-24 ch 1,  | abuseI used to think that a couple yrs ago.." if only i lived in a fairy tale, coz theres always happy endings.." NOW, i don't really..but yeah this poems cute! it tells of the tales briefly but well i like the bit= "And I'll prick my fingerAnd expect to sleep for a hundred yearsUntil someone comes and saves me." Child-like but somewhat sarcastic :P...GREAT ...~TRW |
| myno 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem- I love your writing style, your use of parenthesis, and your tone. |
| negligible fictional force 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abusei like it. -kismet. |
| catseyeview 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI like how you wrapped this in a poem and leave us with the last line. |
| marshbar960 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abusevery picturesque and idealistic...i hope to live happily ever after, and so does the entire world. i love the stories that help illustrate the meaning of a perfect, utopian life. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-02-22 ch 1, | abuse¿isn't witch's life, something better to aspire, than cold beauty's sleep? |
| rocket baby doll 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful... i love the way you have with words. |
| Nameless Melancholy 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseNicely written. The last line was effective...I like the use of parentheses! Have I been here before?? I recognize your writing. |
| AllyCred 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abusenice...i know i hope to live happily ever after too...i love the flow and the story behind this...extremely well written...i like it. lots of love ~AllyCred~ P.S.~~thanks for the review appreciate it. |