 The Random Witness 2005-06-24 . chapter 1I used to think that a couple yrs ago.." if only i lived in a fairy tale, coz theres always happy endings.." NOW, i don't really..but yeah this poems cute! it tells of the tales briefly but well i like the bit= "And I'll prick my fingerAnd expect to sleep for a hundred yearsUntil someone comes and saves me." Child-like but somewhat sarcastic :P...GREAT ...~TRW |
 myno 2005-03-07 . chapter 1Excellent poem- I love your writing style, your use of parenthesis, and your tone. |
 negligible fictional force 2005-02-28 . chapter 1i like it. -kismet. |
 catseyeview 2005-02-26 . chapter 1I like how you wrapped this in a poem and leave us with the last line. |
 marshbar960 2005-02-26 . chapter 1very picturesque and idealistic...i hope to live happily ever after, and so does the entire world. i love the stories that help illustrate the meaning of a perfect, utopian life. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |
 Manuel Fajar 2005-02-22 . chapter 1¿isn't witch's life,
something better to aspire,
than cold beauty's sleep? |
 rocket baby doll 2005-02-20 . chapter 1this is beautiful... i love the way you have with words. |
 Nameless Melancholy 2005-02-20 . chapter 1Nicely written. The last line was effective...I like the use of parentheses! Have I been here before?? I recognize your writing. |
 AllyCred 2005-02-19 . chapter 1nice...i know i hope to live happily ever after too...i love the flow and the story behind this...extremely well written...i like it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
P.S.~~thanks for the review appreciate it. |