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The Random Witness 2005-06-24 . chapter 1
I used to think that a couple yrs ago.." if only i lived in a fairy tale, coz theres always happy endings.." NOW, i don't really..but yeah this poems cute! it tells of the tales briefly but well i like the bit= "And I'll prick my fingerAnd expect to sleep for a hundred yearsUntil someone comes and saves me." Child-like but somewhat sarcastic :P...GREAT ...~TRW
myno 2005-03-07 . chapter 1
Excellent poem- I love your writing style, your use of parenthesis, and your tone.
negligible fictional force 2005-02-28 . chapter 1
i like it. -kismet.
catseyeview 2005-02-26 . chapter 1
I like how you wrapped this in a poem and leave us with the last line.
marshbar960 2005-02-26 . chapter 1
very picturesque and idealistic...i hope to live happily ever after, and so does the entire world. i love the stories that help illustrate the meaning of a perfect, utopian life. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
Manuel Fajar 2005-02-22 . chapter 1
¿isn't witch's life,

something better to aspire,

than cold beauty's sleep?
rocket baby doll 2005-02-20 . chapter 1
this is beautiful... i love the way you have with words.
Nameless Melancholy 2005-02-20 . chapter 1
Nicely written. The last line was effective...I like the use of parentheses! Have I been here before?? I recognize your writing.
AllyCred 2005-02-19 . chapter 1
nice...i know i hope to live happily ever after too...i love the flow and the story behind this...extremely well written...i like it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

P.S.~~thanks for the review appreciate it.
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