This is really good. Seems like something almost everyone could relate to, even if it wasn't relating to them but someone they know. Anyways keep writing.

Pretty good Brit. What i got out of it was that (summed up) your special, you are you. None can change you they try but cant. Ok down to the deep reveiwing I did see some mistakes with spell check so you may want to read over your work again. Your really good at metaphors though. All in all good job it was really nice reading your stuff.