Interesting. The images that come to mind really make me think. Unusual choice of words, but I like that.

keep it up.

The rhyming and flow sounded a little forced so it wasn't as powerful as it could be but the parts with the chain were great. Not one of my favs but you did a good job!

one word: wow. it's just so...real

i love this poem it's one of the best you've ever written _

Thats great alex, again well done, love you -Keith Andrew

whoa...beautiful!

I love this, it makes so much sense. You did a great job.

this is great n so job on one of my writing.

A beautiful piece, and one that does not leave the mind easily. Almost haunting in its surreal truthfulness. Well done.

I like this one, I know how you feel actually.

Great job on this poem.