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| confwuzzled 2005-04-19 ch 1,   | that is frickin incredible!! wowzers!! u win! ('I win' is my friends fav saying and now i'm using it a lot for an odd reason)anyway, you kick so much arse!!~*~confwuzzledness~*~ |
| Infection 2005-04-04 ch 1, | this is antoher good poem, there is also a good range of metaphors.awesome!~infection~ |
| Le Rose Clair du Nuit 2005-03-26 ch 1, | Okay, first of all. I have to say.. Your bio is extrememly long, and exasperating. I love it. XD Second of all, I totally DIG the whole TROY movie -shudders at Orli and Brad- They might not work. They're both too passive. -nodnod- Second. Score, is like, the most wicked-awesome word in the English language. I use it all the time, for random occurances. I'm glad your spreading it around the world, dude. Okay, I'll go to your poem now- Oh, and pink and the word tainted? Sexy. I like it. oO! Tainted Red sounds good. I like that. -repeats it to herself numerous times- o_o The symbolism. Phenomenal. The emotion. Spectaular. The Title. Unbelieveable. SO going into my favorites, babe! ^_^ Keep this up, I totally dig your style! SCORE! XD MJ, The Mistress Joe † An Angel in the Garden of Black Roses † Come find me. |
| Arcane D. 2005-02-27 ch 1, | this poem is awesome, the use of metaphors here are extravagant. -ADD |
| NERVousNirvana 2005-02-27 ch 1, | Wow. This is seriously awesome. I love the line breakage and the sort of perfectly non-forced way that you use words so they sound so great together. Delicious, especially the last four lines. They're really beautiful. |
| angelfelicity 2005-02-26 ch 1, | couldnt be better c u @ church and i hope u get to talk to deryk love ya amanda |
| redsage 2005-02-26 ch 1, | beautiful. just as always. |
| poetic abortion 2005-02-24 ch 1, | :) Wow I am truely amazed by this. ^-^ Great job. I'm loving the metaphors. :P Great job as always. Keep it up!! ^-^ !~* Noelle; Hugs , allot of love and a kiss to you. *~! |
| Nessa Minyatur 2005-02-21 ch 1, | I love the metaphors and all that you use but unfortunately, I dont really see the meaning of it all. So forgive me. Stop me if i am wrong, but I think what you are trying to say is that it sucks that this person doesnt see you the way they should? Am I right, wrong? Which one? Clue me in! Huggles NeSsA |
| M. R. Smale 2005-02-20 ch 1, | Very unique and beautifully written poem. The flow is excellent and the message just as powerful. Keep up the great work! |
| MR.SEAN 2005-02-20 ch 1, | I liked the poem, geez dude you ahave some interesting tittles! |
| nine iron 2005-02-19 ch 1, | Well written, great layout, shows skill and thought. Nine Iron |
| sarcastic-student 2005-02-19 ch 1, | "And I just wish I could bleed, a little black and white." That was brilliant. You expressed your feelings so well. Great job! |