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| The Prettiest Banana 2007-12-19 ch 1,   | I love how simple this is, and how realistic. It's not like those really chlice over-the-top romances that are so plentiful on here. It's romantic and sweet and I love it. |
| iluvsweep 2006-06-12 ch 1, | i read your story 'april fools, idiot' on the BUG profile thingy, and thought it was really funny (gonna try and copy my review over to your actual story under your name! well, when it actually comes up) so thought i'd check out your other stories i don't usually read one-shots, but i liked your other one so much, i thought i'd try it out, and i'm so glad i did!! i couldn't really see where it was going at first, but i think that was a good thing in this, i'm not sure seeing as i don't read many one-shots, but it shouldn't be predictable right?? i'm not sure the last line works...maybe that's just me, i dunno maybe 'i love you' might go better? not sure, but the rest of it, really like the way the thought process goes, and i love how tony starts doing the things she did to him, that he thought were annoying... just noticed, she doesn't have a name?? is that intentional..like is that meant to stand for something? as you might tell i'm not that great at analysing stories hehe, but i love reading them! anyway i'm not sure this makes much sense at all, it's pretty late at the moment, 2.40 am to be precise! i couldn't sleep lol, but yeah, great story, keep writing!! |
| emily 2005-02-26 ch 1, | aw! that's so sweet! i love it! |
| VeryObsessed21 2005-02-25 ch 1, | that was really good... and i think the last statement is very tru! |
| starbucks x addict 2005-02-19 ch 1, | Usually, I don't go for these kind of stories (short ones), but I found your summary to be rather interesting. So, obviously, I clicked, and I read. Can't say that I'm disappointed. I loved how simplistic it was... and different, too--with your characters, I mean. Nice job. ~starbucks x addict |
| Weird girl 2005-02-19 ch 1, | Wow, that was really sweet. There were a couple of grammer errors, but other than that nice story, great antitode for a bad day... |