This has taken on a much more serious tone than "Harmonic Chaos", but the words are well-chosen so that the mood is captured vividly. And at the end, there is no dialogue, which makes its seem as though the narrator is detached from the world. Please, continue to write.

*jaw drops*

wow.

see, uh, i like giving constructive reviews...but honestly, i don't know what i can say that could make this any better because it's great! really is!