they deserved to die, and it's kind of romantic between the vampire and the mortal

oh my god, i am alittle confused but it was i don't want to say grafic as it was real,and tragic

Whoa. hard core stuff. Its good. Please update soon, i'm very intrested.

Wow im enjoying this, though in the first chapter, how her friend killed himself reminds me of my first love Chad... Suicide sucks, as a matter of fact i lost three friends last week to it.

I think you did a wonderful job describing Ramus, I could see him clearly in my mind's eye, good detail on everything actually. Can't wait until the next chapter! Oh and thanks again for your reviews, good to see you can relate to my writings. ^_~

Wow, amazing story, you've got me hooked and its only chapter two!! Your work is phenonmenal, if I even spelled it right. Blarg. Anyway back to the praise,

I wish you would make the chapters just a we bit longer so theres more to tell but what you do is still really amazing, I adore it.

Well off to watch anime (more specificly Saiyuki), ja!!

I understand all to well I am writing three stories right now and have writers block on all three! >_< Good chapter, I can't wait to see more.

HEY! What's the big idea?! Man you need longer chapters! this one was AWESOME! I loved it! Please, please PLEASE update soon! Like tomorrow or maybe the day after that...but SOON!

WoW 0_0

I likes! Hate that Vince had to go so soon *pouts*. Anywho please update soon!

I like this a lot. It's so sad with Vince killing himself, but not overdone for the beginning of a story.