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| simpleplan13 2005-04-01 ch 1,   | so true.. great job & i like the format a lot |
| Relayer 2005-03-01 ch 1, | I think I get what you're trying to express, it's something i've felt before. I like the build up of intensity and structuring. |
| fren chi 2005-02-20 ch 1, | reminds me of floyd and dream theater somehow. i like the italic sectioning. i have just got back from jimbos so expect a ** review |
| xHannahx 2005-02-19 ch 1, | read the first 2 lines of the last stanza. now read them again. :P i like this poem, seems familiar somehow, namely cos thats how i feel. nice expression of that! Han. |
| Dave The Fool 2005-02-19 ch 1, | the count throughout really gives a sense of rising anger, and it really works. its a powerful poem |