Do I know you? Because... (sniffle) Mff, I wanna give you a hug now. It would certainly be too much for the literary world to loose you; you have an amazing talent for self-expression. Please don't be so sad...!

Very emotional. The lines put together in this poem fit perfectly and it's good that you don't sacrifice the message. Great work.

Really nice.. great job ;) ur a really talented writer =)

An interesting poem. I wish I knew who you were talking to, because there are many different people this could be focused toward. Keep writing.

your a very good writer, that brought tears to my eyes...for quite a while...its beautiful...but it reminds me of the relationship i am currently in...

oh, that's beautiful, i don't really know the story from it, but i dont need to it's very good. thanks again for the great writing.

I liked this poem, it's very truethfull, I don't know if youve experienced this but I can tell youve considered it for only those who have can give insight to it the way you have in alot of your writting. I particularyly like the lines "Will you know that I loved you, and none of this was meant to hurt you?

Will you still smile that smile I loved to see?

Or will you spend the rest of the your days missing me?" They particularly speak to me because I went to a friend of mine to take me to the hospital to be pumped when I thought of what my fiance would do when he found out. Keep writing, big sister's watching you.(Mwahaha!lol)

...i'm speechless. This is just so beautiful.

Wow! *o* I love it, but choose more peircing words. Other than using some other words, I think it was fine, and I could see some point behind it.

This is nice, I like it. Thank you for the review I am new at this and need all that I can get. But this was great only one spelling error I found change non to none

Hey! Nice poem! I know that I can never get the hang of rhyming, so Go You! Nice story line to it (another thing I can't get the hang of) and nice ending. Damn! I would like to be able to give some constructive critisicsm, but i can't find nothin! Oh well.. Cya

This nicely writen. It made me sad inside. Nice work!

Good luck and keep writing,

Emma

wow...that was really beautifully written. you managed an excellent rhyming scheme, something i generally lack. So much emotion, so well written. very touching.

really nicely written... very intense emotions and all that. Only critique- don't use abbreviations for words (ie- plz)- it takes away from the professionalism of the piece. Otherwise, I can't wait to read more. :) BTW- thanks for the review. :)

wow. that's really deep.