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Carrollesque 2005-03-09 . chapter 1
Lot of expression in this peice, as well as heart. Being the bitter cynic that I am, I question your interpretations of love, and the writing gets a little stale in the fourth and fifth paragraph, also, the second to last paragraph is pretty sappy. Still, a very good little peice.

Keep it up!
Cloud Burst 2005-03-05 . chapter 1
- tear - very heartwarming =)
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