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| Modulated 2005-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseLot of expression in this peice, as well as heart. Being the bitter cynic that I am, I question your interpretations of love, and the writing gets a little stale in the fourth and fifth paragraph, also, the second to last paragraph is pretty sappy. Still, a very good little peice. Keep it up! |
| Cloud Burst 2005-03-05 ch 1, | abuse- tear - very heartwarming =) |