Very good poem.

everyone has that child. its just the realising its there thats the shock!

Oh! Oh! ::raises hand and jumps up and down:: I can relate to this one! Yup, me! ^_^; Another great poem. The flow isn't quite as good as in "Fade", but still a v. good piece o' writing. Yay!

Hmm... this is really making me think... clever poem, thanks for sharing, x weasel within x

Hey, I really liked this poem. You kepty it flowing well and it's deep. Gread Job.

very well-written! I love that line 'I died inside and didn't know it'!